The Small challenge

I added a small challenge to Elakiri and many people did reply with some stunning creations of their own.

Here I am re-posting them as a tribute to all who contributed. .. starting with my first post as well.

Yes.. it's just a small challenge for the almighty of all you poets and poetesses.

I jot down something the other day.. and I just can't seem to finish it .

Finish it in the sense of putting some right worlds and giving the whole thing a better face lift with rhyming words and an overall "feeling" for it.

So, use this. .. put some of your own words, make it beautiful.. give it a feeling, cause I "feel" that it's such a nice set of words aligned together to express a beautiful feeling.

Quote:

My Soul longing for you, You are my unseated desire, My heart is restless, Bleeding into my life, Walk with me, in this lonely world... I am walking through the dark nights with fragile dreams afraid I'll crash The flame of hope burns bright, but I fear a storm, A storm which can ravage my dreams, All I seek is a "yes".... There is the moon and the skies, I am afraid of the moon disappearing behind clouds, loneliness bites, as my pulse quickens, without a moment of respite, it's a strange tale, with nothing but restlessness.... All I seek is a "YES"

Let's see something beautiful

Sri Lion

Horizon dressed in rainbows amid mighty rains
Like sunshine hold the fate of a night's tide in vein
End my craving, douse the flaming
All I seek is a YES..

JayanthaH

Whisper could break serene
Would drift clouds to cover the moon
Make my world dark again
Save me…………..
Don’t say “YES”
Just think it aloud
Save my day, my night & my insanity
I don’t want to be sane………………again

HimaliL

It’s the story I hear and to live in forever
Be the prince and princess or sweet angels
But I don’t want anyone come ruin my land
I know I can protect you
All I seek is a ……………“YES”

Ireshasy

when I seek for "YES"
rainbow comes and vanishes
dark mist runs in the fairy land
all mellodies become silent
freeze thoughts and dreams

waiting till realize n say "YES"
till a tear brings a dearest warmth
till strings make enchanting music
till a moon shine over the clouds
till a wetted heart shiver in magical portion...