Here I am re-posting them as a tribute to all who contributed. .. starting with my first post as well.
Yes.. it's just a small challenge for the almighty of all you poets and poetesses.
I jot down something the other day.. and I just can't seem to finish it .
Finish it in the sense of putting some right worlds and giving the whole thing a better face lift with rhyming words and an overall "feeling" for it.
So, use this. .. put some of your own words, make it beautiful.. give it a feeling, cause I "feel" that it's such a nice set of words aligned together to express a beautiful feeling.Quote:
My Soul longing for you,
You are my unseated desire,
My heart is restless, Bleeding into my life,
Walk with me, in this lonely world...
I am walking through the dark nights with fragile dreams afraid I'll crash
The flame of hope burns bright, but I fear a storm,
A storm which can ravage my dreams,
All I seek is a "yes"....
There is the moon and the skies,
I am afraid of the moon disappearing behind clouds,
loneliness bites, as my pulse quickens,
without a moment of respite,
it's a strange tale,
with nothing but restlessness....
All I seek is a
Let's see something beautiful
Horizon dressed in rainbows amid mighty rains
Like sunshine hold the fate of a night's tide in vein
End my craving, douse the flaming
All I seek is a YES..
Whisper could break serene
Would drift clouds to cover the moon
Make my world dark again
Don’t say “YES”
Just think it aloud
Save my day, my night & my insanity
I don’t want to be sane………………again
It’s the story I hear and to live in forever
Be the prince and princess or sweet angels
But I don’t want anyone come ruin my land
I know I can protect you
All I seek is a ……………“YES”
when I seek for "YES"
rainbow comes and vanishes
dark mist runs in the fairy land
all mellodies become silent
freeze thoughts and dreams
waiting till realize n say "YES"
till a tear brings a dearest warmth
till strings make enchanting music
till a moon shine over the clouds
till a wetted heart shiver in magical portion...